Your have two seconds with your seminar title to either gain or lose
an attendee (and a potential new clients). If each client is worth $5,000
to you, your title could easily be worth $50,000. So would it be worth
hiring a copywriter to do this correctly?
You can use words to move mountains, but few financial advisors do.
They forget that there are people, professional copywriters, some paid
millions of dollars a year, for the words they put in ads that lead
people to take action resulting in billions of dollars in sales.
Here are a few tips to writing a great seminar title:
Make sure you know what concerns your audience.
If you don't know, you'll need to take a survey or ask them. Don't
assume. For example, most advisors tell me that seniors are most worried
about running out of money. But if you actually get the data and don't
assume, you'll find their greatest fear is making irreversible financial
mistakes (which may cause them to run out of money in the future). This
may seem like a small difference, but it's not. Which of these two seminar
titles will get a bigger crowd of retirees:
- Six Irreversible Financial Mistakes to Avoid in Retirement or
- How to Avoid Running out of Money
I am certain that the first seminar title will
get twice as much response.
For years in the late 80s and well
into the 90s I did a seminar called “Six Ways to Maximize
Retirement Income.” Attendance was good and I raised on
average, $1 million per seminar. The attendance started to drop
and did not recover. Some hard looking resulting in these two
realizations:
- Retirees (by 1997) had become
more fascinated with returns in the stock market and were less
income-focused
- Interest rates had been declining
for 15 years, and that had become accustomed to low rates
So I changed
the seminar title and bullet points to reflect the altered
interest amongst my target market. My attendance increased
and business returned to normal.
The seminar title is the most important thing because they’re
going to read the seminar title and then they’re going to
either decide to read the rest of the invitation or throw it away.
Now here’s some examples of bad seminar titles and good
seminar titles. A bad seminar title will be non-emotional. A good
seminar title will be emotional. So here’s a bad seminar
title if you were advertising for long-term care. A bad seminar
title would be:
‘43% of people over age 65 will need long-term care’.
It’s a really, really terrible seminar title. It’s
the kind of seminar title that you see big insurance companies
use and the reason it’s bad is because it’s totally
logical. It appeals to the left brain. Any time you see a seminar
title with a number in it:"43% of people over age 60," it’s
appealing to the logical side of the brain which is not the emotional
side and it’s not engaging the person in the way that they’re
going to act. A better seminar title;
‘Mrs. Smith can’t
buy grandson Johnny a birthday present. Could it happen to you?’
First
of all, it says she couldn’t buy her grandson, which
means she must be a grandparent. The ad, the inference is that
it’s speaking to grandparents first, so anybody who
reads that who’s a grandparent is going to identify right
away and then it’s going to say, ‘she can’t buy
grandson, but could it happen to you?’ Right at that moment
there’s one of two emotions that get triggered in somebody
who’s a grandparent—fear or curiosity. You know “could
what happen to me?” or “what happened to her?” And
they want to read the rest of it, so we don’t really care
what emotion it is that we trigger, it’s just that an emotion
will get people engaged to read the rest of the ad so that’s
really the important issue.
The seminar title needs to attract and capture the right readers.
Therefore, your seminar title should not only
engage people emotionally, but it should target the audience so that
people who are qualified will continue to read it and people who
aren’t qualified won’t.
Let me give you a quick example. If you wrote an ad that said:
"Mercedes Benz Owners Read This:"
You clearly want Mercedes Benz owners to
read the ad, and if they own a Ford, you don’t want them
to read the ad. So a good seminar title will also identify who
the attendee should be. Of course, since you'll be mailing to
a very targeted list, the recipients will read the seminar title
and immediately identify.
Other seminar title rules
You’re going to always speak directly to a targeted audience.
The faster you can use the word ‘you’ in your seminar
invitation, the better off you are.
Secondly, present tense. Whenever you structure anything in future
tense you are going to lose reaction.
Seminar titles must leave the reader with
a question that they must answer by reading the remainder of
the invitation so you got to leave them hanging—that’s
the job of the seminar title. People either have to have an emotional
reaction that they need to satisfy or a question in their mind
or a curiosity.
Make your seminar titles crystal clear.
You can’t get clever
in a seminar title or do a play on words or get cutesy. Always
assume, that your reader never got past the sixth grade. So don’t
use anything that refers to a Shakespeare play or anything that
makes reference to a Van Gogh painting. Anything that happened
on The Simpsons is safe.
There's also Voyeur Appeal—another good
strategy for a seminar title. Soap operas appeal or satisfy America’s Voyeur Appeal.
Americans desire to spy on somebody else’s life. We love
to do that, it’s just built into our culture. So a seminar
title that appeals to that voyeur appeal works very well.
‘Mrs. Johnson can’t buy grandson
Johnny a birthday present, could this happen to you?’
The reader wants to find out what happened
to Mrs. Johnson. So any type of voyeur appeal works really well
because Americans are just addicted to satisfying that need to
butting into somebody else’s business. A seminar title
that begins to tell a story about somebody works well.
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